Another haikuish poem. please be as generous about your comments to this as the first one. Both these poems are a reflection of what i am thinking right now. But interpretation as before is left to the reader....
I had asked for comments what the interpretations were.. i recieve only one like that.. the rest were all .. let us say appreciatve ??? ;)
Dissolution....
Borders on sense
Fences by reason
Trapped inside
the mind regins
I yearn to see
the light behind the light
these shackles i wound
unknowingly
Let me be free
the form destroyed
my mind shattered
I dissolve....
8 years ago
4 comments:
If you have seen the hindi movie Dil Chahta Hain, I believe Akshay Khanna's character may be best described by this 'poem'.
spell check, man, please!!
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is it not shackled-
your verse
these letters
your haiku, fenced as it is?
why must shackles behave-
just so
not defy
a word, what forces it within?
-are you bound
or is the rope
tied to you?
interpretations...
the two together sound like the words of a troubled soul in a place where he doesnt want to be, but as yet without a vision of his future paradise.... fighting, winning, but dissatisfied and disillusioned!!
no one ever said enlightenment comes easy!! :o)
good luck.... (WITH YOUR PHD!!! really more than anything else at this point)!
reflects the inner most clear instinct of the true seeker!
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